Tuesday 22 May 2018
Creative writing, a floating house
As the night drew closer, so did the clouds. As the children went to bed, so did the sun. When the sun drew closer to the horizon, a harmony of colours blanketed the sky, the stars filled the night sky with a wonderful light that summoned the moon to join in with the fun. After the chimney spat out its last breath of smoke, I was nuzzled up between my blankets, my teddy bear, up close against my chest in a full embrace.
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That is a really descriptive story! Hi i'm Leo and that absolutely pictures it all in my mind. there is so much that you can write about with that starting!
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That's an awesome starter Nadia, you're such a good writer. If you're not an actress when you grow up, I bet you'll be a writer. You used similes, personifications, and loads more. This really made me imagine a cool image in my mind. Good work Nadia. Best story I've seen from our class yet.
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